Looking at the comments posted earlier, its good that she is looking at the camera, it creates a stronger link between the viewer and the model. I really enjoy the composition on the one on top.
Usually the eye contact is one of the most powerful expressions in the picture, but it is also the hardest thing to capture! I can't do it the way I'm imaging it! Sometimes it is too much, sometimes like here it is not enough!
Nice work they came out lovely. I especially like the bottom image, you've caught a very feline look from Gemma
Thank you very much! :)
Thanks vesko :) means a lot!